I was glued to this story until it ended. Hollow Jackson, The narrator for this story is just as talented as the author. The author is extremely gifted and talented and it shows throughout this story. I can say this, if you're looking for a story that is different than stories about other world's and people then you MUST listen to this one. I won't write details about this story because I have a tendency to give too much away. I really hope this author will continue writing more stories of the Veil Realm series and adding them to Audible. It was unlike any storie I've ever listened to. Bad writing, bad plot = lousy book I will return. I dozed off for a few minutes and suddenly the main character is a slave (who is raped on a regular basis) by some overlord from outer space? Something like that anyway. So it went on like that for the first hour. That’s how I think the author wrote her book. I bite my plump lower lip, run my sinewy tongue over my blindly white teeth, positively aflutter as to how to pen my review. I’m not going to torture myself looking for examples from the book, but I’ll make one up to give you an idea of the overuse of adjectives and adverbs (often used incorrectly or illogically): I’m sitting prettily and upright in my gargantuan king-sized bed covered with mauve slippery, silken sheets, my somber blue-brown eyes earnestly watching myself in the glaring reflection of my computer screen writing this stupendous review.
Worst writing I've encountered in a long time
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